Susan Ee

College essay feedback winners

Thanks for all your comments, cheers, and shares! The following students were chosen at random and are invited to send me one essay each. I will read and help focus your message. You can let me know if you’d like help in a specific area such as “Please help me reduce the word count to 600."

The following people are invited to send me their essay through my website at susanee.com

Helen Lopez
Gina
Ra.sesh
Machelle
Jay

Best wishes to all my college bound readers! I’m rooting for you to get into your top choice!

I’ll help my readers get into college!

I just learned that US college essay deadlines are in a few days. I want to help my readers get into college!

I’ll randomly pick 5 students to read their college essays. I’ll do what I can to help focus your message. Hopefully, they’ll fall in love with your essay and beg you to come to their college with a big, fat scholarship. :)

Comment, retweet, repost, etc. to let me know you’re interested. I will pick 5 commenters/retweeters/reposters at random. Check back tomorrow night (Sat)--I’ll post the online names of the five winners.

Since it’s your essay, I will not write or rewrite the essay for you, but I will make suggestions to help sharpen your message.

No purchase of ANGELFALL, WORLD AFTER, or END OF DAYS necessary, although I’ll always have a special place in my heart for my readers. :)